Sunday, October 26, 2014

Thoughts

Let me explain...
I begin; Trying
to explain all I'm thinking
To my mind.....

Where do I start? 
I think..
No its not about where
Its about what to
explain..Innumerable 

Thoughts..Few linger on;
While others are blips.
Like those electric pulses;
Pulses are they...

Like a movie teaser..
Showing up enough to 
get that attention
Wanting you to scratch it 
Further...to make meaning out of it

Why is it lacking 
Depth? Fear of realization
Or fear of
Admittance..the thoughts
Trigger action..

Which..
I am not ready for yet..
The thoughts..
Raising questions and further
Thoughts; look beyond those rosy glasses

I'm pursued, but they don't 
Wait..for me to grab them
One ending before the other begin
All over.

Spaghetti of Thoughts....

12 comments:

  1. One fellow long ago derisively commented reacting to my prodding queries , "what the heck does one get out of thinking and what one misses not thinking" ? He found the answer to his question."Nothing not even a piece of bullshit is gained or lost".

    I decided what I should make of his statement.
    Here, I see interesting twist to existence. Only if we think!

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    1. :D Yes Anil...Thinking does make one mad! You know some of my thoughts are so unstructured. I want to mould it but they fly away!

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  2. "Thinking" is both a boon and bane to the mankind.
    I loved your 4th stanza...

    Nice!

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    1. Locomente - Yes..Mind is a monkey :-D

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  3. You are today where your thoughts have brought you; you will be tomorrow where your thoughts take you.

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  4. wonderful poem and excellent blog :)
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    1. Shilpa, welcome to my blog. Thanks much. Please visit here as much as possible.

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I'd love to know what you thought :-) Please shoot!